The crit was very useful i found, Took the feedback sheets and summarized the strengths and weakness to form my next plan of action.
One of the strengths i had was the direct bold type approach of the idents, so il be keeping that in my final idents.
I also received some good feedback about my designed logo however i was told on a negative note that it was too small and there should be more focus on it.
Taking this advice on i have come up with a few different ideas on how to make the logo more distinctive and become a larger focus point of the idents.
Some more negatives i received,
Lack of imagery
More storyboards
Lack of experimentation
SUMMARY
I will create more storyboards with ideas of imagery, emphasis on the use of more imagery with the type, within this experimenting with the different ideas and everything!
Other ways forward!
Issues with Audio. What will i actually be using!? Just music or the actual quote audio.
design final assets for idents.
Assess movie imagery to help decisions with design ideas.
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